Ricky's Poem
wrote this while talking to my cousin Ricky so it is therefor dedicated to her ;) :D.
i am simple i am deep
i am someone i am no-one
i am lost and confused yet i know a path
i have knowledge but know less than nothing
i am cut off removed, ties severed in a blink
i am intrinsically connected, a part of my surroundings
i am shallow and empty
i am complete and filling
i am willow and reed, bent and shattered,
i am straight as oak, strong as stone fortress
i am false and hidden
i am open and sincerely true
i am less than the dust of the earth
i am the purpose of the world
i am lacking faith
i am a believer the son of believers
i am unified with my creator (i hope...)
hope you all enjoy this one
ps i know you all want pics and i will hopefully update them one of these days... - if my bro ever lets me ;) (he's playing battlefield 2 with a friend right now :D)


6 Comments:
Thanks Levi (love the new version and the added lines) :) It's a good thing there is no "Nothing" in the poem or you would have a lot more to deal with... ;)
B"H
Did you get it in your email?
I like ;)
Was at a bar mitzvah tonight and somehow we started speaking about you and your breakdancing...
Breakdancing in mexico :o
Yeah Baby ;): rolling... no prob. and i like too (duh).
do you know how hard it was to do away with the nothing!!! (question mark still not working ;))
ms anon: yes i did and deleted as well. thank you.
Chasidishe Shaigitz: hey how did tzali get a hold of your account ;) (question mark)
hope it was only good things ;) :D
Well if it was that difficult for you than it's even more impressive. Came out awesome even without the nothing :) (Comment #2 ;))
evil: me?? ::shocked:: ME?!?! well thank you very much ::shaking with indignation:: you... you... EVIL EVIL MAN!!! :D :D :D
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